proofreading of documentation

Review Request #1375 — Created March 27, 2022 and submitted

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proofreading of documentation

 
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proofreading of documentation
537853c3095d2bbd63547480580f736a253a24ed ivanhoe
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Thanks, however, there was another documentation review request already merged, can you rebase? https://reviews.imfreedom.org/r/1373/

grimgrim

I don't think the scalar value bit adds anything here.

grimgrim

there's supposed to be relative in here, not sure on the best way to word it.

grimgrim
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    Thanks, however, there was another documentation review request already merged, can you rebase?

    https://reviews.imfreedom.org/r/1373/

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ivanhoe
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  2. docs/configuration.md (Diff revision 2)
     
     
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    I don't think the scalar value bit adds anything here.

    1. I didn't mean to sound academic here, it's just that the original sentence "If you are just specifying a single task, you can just pass its name not in a list" sounded odd to me.

      How about "If you are just specifying a single task, you can just pass its name as a single value (not as a list)."?

    2. yeah that sounds fine.

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    there's supposed to be relative in here, not sure on the best way to word it.

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ivanhoe
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  1. Ship It!
  2. Awesome work, thanks!!

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