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  Review Request #1375
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Thanks, however, there was another documentation review request already merged, can you rebase? https://reviews.imfreedom.org/r/1373/

      		
      
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I don't think the scalar value bit adds anything here.

      		
      
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there's supposed to be relative in here, not sure on the best way to word it.

      		
      
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    Thanks, however, there was another documentation review request already merged, can you rebase?
    

    https://reviews.imfreedom.org/r/1373/
    
  
    
 
    

 
    
  


    
 
    
 
      

  

 
    


    

 
    

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    I don't think the scalar value bit adds anything here.
    
  
    
 
    

 
    
  


    
 
    
 
      

  


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      I didn't mean to sound academic here, it's just that the original sentence "If you are just specifying a single task, you can just pass its name not in a list" sounded odd to me. 
      

      How about "If you are just specifying a single task, you can just pass its name as a single value (not as a list)."?
      
 
      

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      yeah that sounds fine.
      
 
      

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    there's supposed to be relative in here, not sure on the best way to word it.
    
  
    
 
    

 
    
  


    
 
    
 
      

  

 
    


    

 
    

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    Awesome work, thanks!!
    
  
    
 
    

 
    
  


    
 
    
 
      

  

 
    


    

 
    

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